Looking to Build

[flightbiz]

Hello Everyone,

Just wondering if there is anyone in the Omaha area looking for flight instruction of any sort? www.nebflight.com has just kick the doors open in the last thirty days & were looking to build the student base.

Any ideas on marketing would be appreciated!

flightbiz

 

[Flic1]

To start, you may want to rewrite all of your course descriptions on that site. The grammar/punctuation use is horrendous . If I was a prospective student, I wouldn't have much confidence after reading those descriptions. Don't take it the wrong way, just putting in my 2 cents. Otherwise, good luck.

 

[DAS at 10/250]

I have to agree with Flic1. I am by no means and English or grammar major but this website is horrible. "Your" implies possession and "you're" is a contraction for you are. You might want to fix that error and the other 20 or so mistakes by hiring someone to proof read your material before you submit this for public review.


Otherwise, good luck.
Go Sooners.

 

[pilotman2105]

I agree with the other comments. The website you have is going to do more harm than good I'm afraid.

I know that profit margins are thin, especially for a start up business, but invest a bit in a good web design, and use it as a tool.